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Author	StoneySmile
Tags	action author:stoneysmile playable rated
Created	2008-02-24
Last Modified	2008-02-24
Rating	4 by 5 people.
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Description	Hey everyone, this is my first real map. I have been a long time N fan, but this is my first, I am very pleased with the outcome, please let me know what you think!

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Nexx

2008-03-13

I'd still say I liked it, but it's a bit long and boring to me, in part because it's symmetrical and relatively open. There are also some unnecessary items (ex: you don't need that many bounceblocks).

I've also got a couple more things for you to fix: the group of gold on the bottom left-ish area has only 2 pieces, when the other side has 3. Also, you can reach the exit without opening the door above it - see my demo.

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StoneySmile

2008-02-24

FIXED

HEY, I UPDATED the level, the doors no longer stack and I slightly moved the location of the two upper switches.

StoneySmile

2008-02-24

Thanks guys

Thanks for the feedback, I was wondering about the stacked doors, so I test played it and it seemed to work, well thanks for letting me know. I hope people will still play it anyways!

vrumanuk

2008-02-24

Very Nice

Great first map. I did experience what psychosnail mentioned but besides that I really enjoyed playing.

PsychoSnail

2008-02-24

Bugged?

Great for a first, but avoid stacking doors on top of each other in the same place, because they get glitched as shown in my demo (after opening all the doors, I still couldn't get through the second).

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Redemption

Comments

Oh and...

It's alright

FIXED

Thanks guys

Very Nice

Bugged?