my first race

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Author	szygy_pwnd
Tags	author:szygy_pwnd flowy not race rated that
Created	2008-03-22
Rating	4 by 6 people.
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Description	dont be to harsh comment demo rate advice pointers anything

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i made this befor i had a acount

It's the object placement that needs work - the enemies and gold. Make sure that the gold looks good - in linear race maps like this, gold is a decoration.

It's very good for a first race, so I'm giving it a 4.

Here's a demo, and map data with a reset ninja - sorry about stretching the screen.

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szygy_pwnd

2008-03-23

mustafa is rite

the ledge in the begining is where you start and thanks everyone for the comments im making another race rite now so check it out sometime

bhz

2008-03-22

demo

Demo Data	2:0

mustafa15

2008-03-22

@MaxRide

It's kinda obvious... There's a little ledge for him to stand on at the beginning, and its at the beginning of the gold trail

mustafa15

2008-03-22

Pretty good

The flow is pretty good, but I have a few small suggestions. The two drones seemed pretty useless, although the other enemies worked well with the map. Also, I don't really like the follow the yellow brick road gold placement strategy, it looks a bit sloppy imo. 3/5

MaximumRide

2008-03-22

How are you guys,

about to go and rate a map that doesn't even have the ninja where the author supposed it to be? 0_o

Etz

2008-03-22

agreed with etdeshon

just reset the map and edit the new map data here, otherwise i don't know exactly where to put it.

3.5

szygy_pwnd

2008-03-22

thanks dood

my bad about the resting i played it befor i submited it and the forum thing idk how to post things or maps

etdeshon

2008-03-22

not bad...

especially for a first race map... also needs to be reset lol! thats ok though cause i reset. and like i said not bad for a first... also... dont make such a big drop like on the right side. if you do then make some sort of way you flow through it or something. thats about it. 3.5/5 for a first!