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Roller Coaster Race

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Author Mrsmitty
Tags author:mrsmitty race unrated
Created 2008-04-05
Rating 2 more votes required for a rating.
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Description I like the loopy bit just past the start

please comment,

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well....

this is more of an action map than a race map. like bhz said, when there is a slope in a race, most people will jump there. the main thing you want to work on is flow. that is probably the only part that takes the longest to get unless your a quick learner. look at some of the bitesized races to get some ideas. thats how i started. i wont rate because it is your first but try to work on better flow.

first of all...

See demo

And now for some critism...
- In some places here and there, the flow is lost, like in the lower-left corner. Races rarely slow down like that.
- When a lot of people playing races see a slope, they jump. But if you had jumped at the first curve, a lot of the gold would have been missed.
- It's very hard to get in the tiny space between the thwump and the shaft.
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be nice NastoK

this race is good

I EMBRACE THE NEW ADDITION TO THE COMMUNITY!!!
but thats just one opinion NastoK...
can i suggest 2 things:

1:you tell me WHY it was bad and how i can improve

and

2: you EMBRACE the new addition to the community

THIS IS

by far the worst race map I have ever played.