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Author	TRT_Bardock
Tags	author:trt_bardock medium playable unrated
Created	2008-10-11
Last Modified	2008-10-11
Rating	4 more votes required for a rating.
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Description	Plz comment on what all I need to improve upon in my map-making. Thanks. All-gold is the challenge. RCE.

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TRT_Bardock

2009-01-11

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Lol, ya i do. Mainly wireframe art and DDAs.. Playable maps ain't my cup of tea..

Guitar_Hero_Matt

2009-01-11

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Thanks for that feedback. I appreciate it.
Here's a completion demo just in case -

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Demo Data

TRT_Bardock

2008-10-11

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Thanks for that feedback. I appreciate it.
Here's a completion demo just in case -

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Demo Data

Lightning55

2008-10-11

Love the bottom. Thwump usage :D

Great map. But the gold is spread too far out. The middle (in the place with zap drones) was pretty awesome. 4. I also like how it looks like a tiki with blood dripping from its jaws. The rockets were amazing, didnt think they would follow me so far.

Overall: looks a bit noobish but definitely isnt. Gameplay is above par, but its the deceptive challenge that really won me over. Using thwumps like that is also a good sign. Still a 4.

(btw, can you check out this map? [nmaps.net]) You dont have to, but I would really appreciate it.