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Lovely sours

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Author Grapefruit
Tags author:grapefruit playable rated thwumplicious
Created 2008-10-11
Last Modified 2008-10-11
Rating
4
by 24 people.
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Description my first map, enjoy

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brilliant

tried
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hey,

this is great. especially for a first. 5aved.
You have great map-making potential - I hope to see more from you (yes, I'm about to play your second, too).
Some more difficulty and more innovation would be nice.
Keep up the good work! 4/5.

Yah

That is a good idea, just someone has already done it. Im not saying that you shouldnt do it, just letting you know. Good luck with your map. :D
Okay Im really bad at explaining things so bear with me.

First you place a bouncepad where you want the teleport to start. Make sure it is the last object you have placed then go into the "level code." In the level code change the very last number (the -1) into -2, -3 or however fast you want him to move.

Then place another bouncepad above the other one where you want the ninja stop. You will have to do a lot of code editing to get it to work right. Well, that is how you make a VERTICAL teleport. I dont know how to make any other ones. ^^

If you need any more help or if I just suck at explaining then I can search for a tutorial on the forums. Hope I helped. :D

@rule

So just because its this persons first map and they have potential Im supposed to give them 1 or 2 more points then the maps deserves? I dont think so. And stop telling people what to rate and stop saying to ignore peoples critique and comments.

Sorry grapefruit. You do have potential and such I just didnt think this map deserved a 5. Welcome to NUMA. I expect good things from you. :D

Simplistic

Yet challenging.
Quite fun!
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this is real good!

doctor feelgood! sorry. 4/5

agreeing with spudz

frankly it sucked, first map or not.. but you'll learn and get better, good luck in the map making world

Agree

with spuz and even though this is his first map, I'll give it a 3.
Nothing great.
And rule, do not complain about my decision.
=P
Ironically, its his first and it already has more publicity ^^

http://nmaps.net/139615

good for a first

the gold placement and tiles could be better.
4/5

It's Thwumplicious!!!

Yes well

I could cheat through the door if i got the thwump squeeze correct.

Anyway, I'm being nice, I'm not rating

Nice... ..lol..

I like the game play alot though it wasn't that challenging..
gold was sloppy...
and the tileset was ugly..
but since its your first... 4/5

anyway howcome your first map gets rated and mine doesn't......
:(
Ignore him for now, this is an awesome first map!
If you need ratings, just comment on my maps, I'm expecting great stuff from you.

I didn't

Like it.

I was bored very soon and the tileset and gold really put me off.

NR because I would rate it 2 :/

Pretty good

3

excellent first

Love the exit switch placement, I might use that tile/bouncblock configuration in one of my future maps.
Most of the first map are just a lot of spamming.
I think this is a very cool level. And it is your first!
4
AGD;
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You have potential, but first work more on your tilesets and add more variety to your gameplay. 3
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3

The thwumps were okay but none of the little challenges were that hard, at all.

Dude...

4.5/5 it would be 5 but the gold was a little misplaced. I'll rate it 5 so everyone can see that you have potential :D I will do my best to follow you through your map making journey

5aved?

Are you serious? O.o

gold

looks a bit sloppy but theres only 6 pieces of it.. 4

this is good

even if it wasnt a first map! 4

very good

this is very cool and puzzleish 5aved