so... first of all this map was quite bad...One thing to think about when mapping is that more objects often makes worse maps than less objects. Having a cluttered map makes it less fun. The beginning was completely boring what with no enemies in there. Try making a map with more tiles and less objects. Its not about how many objects you place, its about how you place them. This map is not fun to play nor is it pleasing to look at. One suggestion i have heard of is to try and copy a good author's style and build on that until you have your own style. maybe atob or radiumfalcon or ganteka.
bigbird
okay.