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Author	brainstone
Tags	action author:brainstone hychenandthecity unrated
Created	2009-01-14
Last Modified	2009-01-14
Rating	2 more votes required for a rating.
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Description	rest of the serie [nmaps.net] -Her brain was blocked, her feelings uncontrolled. Hy-Chen realized the whole world like a dream. The grey had gone and the hole city was now colourful. How red this skyskraper, what a blue electric, purple light and green windows. Enjoying this wonderful moment that was made for her alone. alone. ALONE!(Loud music playing) Suddenly a red diamond came to her mind, biting like a piece of broken glass. More of them. Thousands. With every of them her head fell more pressed. Hy-Chen began to run. Faster! Black. At first it appeared at the side of her focus. It got more into middle. Black. Pain.(Crescendo) Diamonds were crashing in the middle of her horizont, splittering like hundred fragments. She arrived at the door. Pulling a little hey off her bag, pointed it at the keyhole. She lurched thrugh the corridor and fell finally onto her bed.(Silence)-

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_destiny^-

2009-01-14

in that case, you're doing brilliantly

and i like the story ^^ - just parts like 'the hole city' should be 'the whole city'. Just small things ;P

Continue the story ^^

brainstone

2009-01-14

I´m not a born England ):-(

Should I stop the story because of that?

_destiny^-

2009-01-14

AGD

Second try. I actually enjoyed this quite a bit, this series has a very unique gameplay style. This is the best to utilize that yet. The story has terrible spelling mistakes, though.

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