The Face Beneath the Waves
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| Author | furry_ant |
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| Tags | author:furry_ant lilium race rated thefacebeneaththewaves |
| Created | 2009-05-03 |
| Last Modified | 2009-05-03 |
| Rating |
3 by 12 people.
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| Map Data | |
| Description | My first race.
Tell me how I did. |
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2009-11-01
rule ans Seneschal said it all
3
2009-05-31
found tghe flow i think
but its hard to be sure...
4/5
4/5
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2009-05-04
dodgy flow
needs work.
3/5....above average for a first
3/5....above average for a first
2009-05-04
it was good for a first race : )
but you need to work a little on the flow and enemies
3
3
2009-05-03
O Sene said his thing already
Well, whatever ^^ I added a few things anyways
2009-05-03
Hmmmm, lets learn ^^
First of all, you need to improve a bit on the flow, never be like "well, it works" because the flow HAS to be perfect.
2nd/3rd/4th thing, Use as less launchpads as possible, and improve the placement of enemies (More tactical like)
Also, improve on the gold's placement and looks
fifth thing, talking about looks, your tiles are just there to be functional, of course, that's there main goal.
But you should also try to make them as good looking as possible, this is really important for advertisement.
6th thing, I will give it a 3, because it is not great. Improve on your races, and I might give you a few 4's.
And I know this is your first race ^^
last thing, Would you like to check out my latest race map.
You will like it hehe ^^
2nd/3rd/4th thing, Use as less launchpads as possible, and improve the placement of enemies (More tactical like)
Also, improve on the gold's placement and looks
fifth thing, talking about looks, your tiles are just there to be functional, of course, that's there main goal.
But you should also try to make them as good looking as possible, this is really important for advertisement.
6th thing, I will give it a 3, because it is not great. Improve on your races, and I might give you a few 4's.
And I know this is your first race ^^
last thing, Would you like to check out my latest race map.
You will like it hehe ^^
2009-05-03
Oh
another thing, the flow breaks down when you go for the trapdoors, you end up all over the place.
Completion demo.
Completion demo.
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2009-05-03
Hmm
As I said before, it does look good.
However, a few criticisms:
Not enough gold, you need way more here.
Very few close calls. There's the rocket and that's about it. The chaingun is too far the other way - it kills you if you go through it too quickly, which means you have to slow down (demo included to show you what I mean).
The flow was very rough in places - that can work sometimes, but I don't think it did here. The launchpads ruined the look of the map.
The whole trapdoor thing at the end was pointless when you can just drop down to the finish. If you added gold there, it would be better.
On the plus side, it looks good (third time I've said that...), the flow was actually nice in places, the gold there was was well placed.
Overall, a 2.5 up since it's your first race.
However, a few criticisms:
Not enough gold, you need way more here.
Very few close calls. There's the rocket and that's about it. The chaingun is too far the other way - it kills you if you go through it too quickly, which means you have to slow down (demo included to show you what I mean).
The flow was very rough in places - that can work sometimes, but I don't think it did here. The launchpads ruined the look of the map.
The whole trapdoor thing at the end was pointless when you can just drop down to the finish. If you added gold there, it would be better.
On the plus side, it looks good (third time I've said that...), the flow was actually nice in places, the gold there was was well placed.
Overall, a 2.5 up since it's your first race.
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2009-05-03
Nice for a first.
More of the "minimalistic" type.
2009-05-03
I found the flow
easy to get actually.
4
4
ZTHING
the flow is seriously lacking