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Author	01123
Tags	action author:01123 hard race unrated
Created	2009-06-06
Last Modified	2009-06-06
Rating	3 more votes required for a rating.
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Description	You must travel fast or become stuck, but watch out. This map is fairly difficult, so I'll be interested in who can finish. speed run?

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trumpetmanjez

2009-06-06

Reading back what I said was a bit harsh

But what I said stands, and this isn't worth more than 2 imo. Your demo highlighted some of the bits I found annoying too, I was just wondering if I'd missed something.

The sections all feel clunky and don't really fit into a cohesive whole. None of them were that hard, just awkward, which would have made it more fun if they had been more polished or intuitive. For instance the bounce blocks in the last section just hindered movement and didn't really add to it much I felt.

The mines that bugged me were the circle top left and the bit after the squeeze bottom left. Both of these just destroyed the flow and forced you to take an unnatural feeling route.

It doesn't fit under my definition of "race" but I'm not one to mark down just for adding the wrong tags. I just didn't like it much.

Demo not complete, but I thought I'd post it just to show I'd played it.

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01123

2009-06-06

yeah,

I couldn't delete those in Neditor.
don't know why . . .

01123

2009-06-06

thanks

for rating XYPTERO.

01123

2009-06-06

here's

your demo.

some of the moves are hard to master, I just thought there were some good concepts.

thanks for input.

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XYPTERO

2009-06-06

mines

all the mines made it fun for me, except for the one after the circle in the top left corner.
nice work with gold delay there, means you have to go around twice to get the switches.
also, i noticed that there was one mine and one gold placed outside the box at the top.
that's either an error in coding, or something else went wrong.
also, in terms of action, the wasn't much. (i know, i have that prblem too).
3/5.
nice work.

trumpetmanjez

2009-06-06

Sorry

But this was not fun. At all.

Post a nice demo and I'll take it all back, but this played for the most part like a paricularly annoying and stilted action map. Mines are there to provide challenge, not to piss people off!

01123

2009-06-06

sniped

and no comment?

did anyone play?