NUMA

Summertime Race

Thumbnail of the map 'Summertime Race'

Hover over the thumbnail for a full-size version.

Author rit0987
Tags author:rit0987 easy fun race rated short summertime
Created 2009-06-29
Last Modified 2009-10-07
Rating
4
by 16 people.
Map Data

Description I think I'm good at Aesthetics. But my races aren't exciting, and that's a problem.
Was this better? Tips again?
RCE..

Other maps by this author

Thumbnail of the map 'Someday I'll Hit The Big Times' Thumbnail of the map 'Choose Your Destiny' Thumbnail of the map 'Live, Love, Race...' Thumbnail of the map 'Real Fake Love' Thumbnail of the map 'Rit 0987's Race Shack' Thumbnail of the map 'Be Mine'
Someday I'll Hit The Big Times Choose Your Destiny Live, Love, Race... Real Fake Love Rit 0987's Race Shack Be Mine

Comments

Pages: (0)

AGD

Sub-750.
Demo Data

damn XD thnx
on your profile does not work. It goes to Rit0987's race shack

yes I agree

so it seems

that the people who have a clear understanding of races liked our collab, while the people who don't have many experience with races rated a bit lower. Still, I'd enjoy to do more collabs, but maybe in a bit.

hm yeah...

getting better though : )
4/5...

yeaah thnx for the tips
Try to chain more inventive peices of flow together. I don't mean abstract either. If you check out my recent flowy races, and look close enough at the flow i've used, you'll see that i chain together bits of flow that you perhaps havent seen before. That is what makes a race exiting, rather than chaining the different flow shapes that you are currently using, just understand what flows, and think of new ways to shape that flow. Perhaps you need to start using some objects in your flow too. You can run on top of thwumps, you know - bounceblocks too :P

3.5^

nice

good flow and asthetics as usual...i didn't like the left hand side, and the right chimney felt constricted. Also a trapdoor over the whole at the very start would have improved flow and stopped cheatability.
3.7^ :P
Demo Data

very cool

i like it

It's the same as this one.. Rit0987 :D

sweet

what is it?

Yeah I have a username
and I didn't really like the left chimney part. Your aesthetics are definitely superb, but you seem to have a lot of half circles in your maps, making them very similar. Also, I would've liked to see some more close calls and quick consecutive jumps, to make it more intense, and maybe a few more mines.
2.5^/5
We should do a collab sometime. But to do that you should get a username on the forums.

flo demo

.
Demo Data