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Thunderstruck!

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Author andreas_xx
Tags acdc author:andreas_xx race rated ultimatereading
Created 2009-12-04
Last Modified 2009-12-04
Rating
4
by 13 people.
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Description DED to ultimatereading for the nice try to make the ending of our collab race... unfortunately it wasn't as good as he hoped so he asked me to finish it instead. :(

But anyway... Try it out, rate and don't forget to comment!

(Thunder) (x10)
I was caught
In the middle of a railroad track (Thunder)
I looked 'round,
And I knew there was no turning back (Thunder)
My mind raced
And I thought what could I do? (Thunder)
And I knew
There was no help, no help from you (Thunder)
Sound of the drums
Beatin' in my heart
The thunder of guns!
Tore me apart
You've been - thunderstruck!
Rode down the highway
Broke the limit, we hit the ton
Went through to Texas, yeah Texas
And we had some fun
We met some girls,
Some dancers who gave a good time
Broke all the rules, played all the fools
Yeah, yeah, they, they, they blew our minds
And I was shakin' at the knees
Could I come again please.
Yeah the ladies were too kind
You've been - thunderstruck, thunderstruck
Yeah yeah yeah, thunderstruck
Oh, thunderstruck, yeah
Yeah
Now we're shaking at the knees
Could I come again please.
Thunderstruck, thunderstruck
Yeah yeah yeah, thunderstruck
Thunderstruck, yeah, yeah, yeah
Said yeah, it's alright
We're! Doing fine
Yeah, it's alright
We're! Doing fine
So fine
Thunderstruck, yeah, yeah, yeah,
Thunderstruck, thunderstruck, thunderstruck
Whoa baby, baby, thunderstruck
You've been thunderstruck, thunderstruck
Thunderstruck, thunderstruck, thunderstruck
You've been thunderstruck

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Thumbnail of the map 'Mini jump only' Thumbnail of the map 'The escape from the evil snail!' Thumbnail of the map 'Hard survival' Thumbnail of the map 'Combined Boats' Thumbnail of the map 'Blocky Blocks' Thumbnail of the map '_'
Mini jump only The escape from the evil snail! Hard survival Combined Boats Blocky Blocks _

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nice map

had a lil trouble wit the flow at the end but nevertheless

5
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also in places i had to delay a jump to stay on the right path, or only double jump instead of triple jump to avoid going to fast and dying.

the tiles also really need working on... just try simple stuff - make the flow and try and connect different blocks of tiles with others without disrupting the flow.

with all these criticisms, i still believe that the flow was smooth and easy enough to find.
im saying a 3/5

really scrappy

atleast i did it i guess
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Agree with matty

The tiles look messy imo, and theres to many mines, which a lot are out of place. And the level is way to organic. 3.

hmm

Have to agree with matty on that your maps are all the same style. Im not realy a fan of the tiles & i cant really explain why.

My advice is look over races by other racemakers like riobe or destiny & i would even suggest matty as well ;D

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i agree

i reckon u should try out something new

thanks for the critiscm Matty... personaly i don't think it's to a 5 either, but whatever... :P
sorry to tell you, but your races are wayyyy too loopy, the tiles are used in pretty well much all your races and they are ugly. The mines are really an eyesore, the gold is the same pattern in all your races and is the most simplest placement ever and does not fit the theme of the map at all. The enemies barely do anything and are often unreliable.
If you look at older race authors such as destiny, yungerkid, and riobe you will see how to improve your races and you can even try looking at some newer race authors such as rit and boonie and etdeshon.

no problem mate... but i still think that you should try to make your own race...

man you

made this outstanding sorry i left you standing :( 5aved anyway

well... you can cut of the last rond to the left like this
(i made some mistakes on this demo :P)
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FLOW DEMO

i dont think a speedrun can be done on this
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Freaking 5

NICE work man! Wow, haven't seen a map like this in a while.

looks very nice in thumb, however it looks messy full view D:

The gameplay is vey nice though :P

flow demo
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