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00-0 Closure Dream

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Author Creature
Tags 00-0 action author:creature medium playable rated
Created 2010-01-03
Last Modified 2010-01-03
Rating
4
by 16 people.
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Description First map, please give me good comments peeps.

Have you ever seen something as
opulent as this? Or is it somewhat -
perplexing? Awe-striking?

The eye sees what the man thinks,
The man thinks what he knows,
But dreams of his wants.

His closure dream.

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1211
2011-10-28

Thanks snd you're welcome.

If you love DDAs, you should check out the ones I made:

My DDAs [nmaps.net]

1211
2011-10-14

AGD

Overall, I enjoyed a lot of your maps. I hope to see more in the future.
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LowBeat
2010-01-24

Welcome

This is a very great map and welcome to NUMA

PALEMOON
2010-01-08

welcome to NUMA!


SeventhSpirit
2010-01-03

asami XD

rofl XD

asami
2010-01-03

Heya new mapper! =3

I think the simplicity of this first map is great!
Next time, don't make it too empty.
I think I'm gonna stalk follow you for a while.

4/5

Seneschal
2010-01-03

Not the fastets

But a crazy close call with the rocket o_O
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squibbles
2010-01-03

not bad.

In fact quite good.

I agree with AMLT though. :/

AMomentLikeThis
2010-01-03

Speedrun.

I don't get why people rate maps up if they're the author's first...
This map is pretty average, but I'll round it up to a 3.
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Bl3wolf
2010-01-03

Very good

for a first map
5.

andreas_xx
2010-01-03

welcome!!!

this is insane for a first map... is this your first map ever, or have you made other maps without submitting them?

Anyway, welcome to numa and have a 5/5

BloodyMoonLike
2010-01-03

i would make you comments

but you only have one map.. xD

so.. let's make here some :D

:]

speeddemosnatos
2010-01-03

you are online?

HI! ^^

speeddemosnatos
2010-01-03

Hi

Co-beginner-mapper, nice map, 4/5 it's a bit empty, but for the rest it is a really good map.

Seneschal
2010-01-03

Welcome to NUMA

While this map is good for a first, calling it flawless is going a bit far imo. It's good to see that you've avoided the usual newcomer problems of object spamming and bad object placement, however I felt that the map was rather bland. The empty spaces in this map don't work in its favour, I fell; perhaps you could have continued the tile theme on the left-hand side? The gameplay wasn't too bad, and you've made good use of enemies. I think exiting the bottom section to the left could have been handled better, perhaps using a bounceblock to aid the flow there.
Aesthetically, this map wasn't dire but it wasn't very inspiring, either. Good tiles can enhance a map's atmosphere no end, but this comes with time and practice, so I wouldn't have expected this from a first map.
All in all, it's a promising start; good job!
Here's and AGD:
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numa_ninja
2010-01-03

Huh.

Weird. There's supposed to be Radium here accusing of you being a multiaccounter. Nice first map, by the way. And welcome! :D

timetech
2010-01-03

Welcome to NUMA

I see you have already met two high class mappers haha but this is definately a high classed map gold and mines were good there was no spamming and tiles were relaxing 5aved

ultimatereading
2010-01-03

I think

that you should make another map soon or summit cause I must play more!!!! haha just shows how bored I am right now my mum asked me to tidy my room so sad so long

BloodyMoonLike
2010-01-03

Have Fun Dude! ;D

[:

Creature
2010-01-03

Ah there it is.

Thanks very much ultimatereading. Time to check out your maps.

Creature
2010-01-03

Wait.

If two people 5aved it, shouldn't it be 5 by 2 people and not 1?

ultimatereading
2010-01-03

ah

where are my manors WELCOME TO NUMA!!! if you ever want any advice on anything just ask ;)

ultimatereading
2010-01-03

agree

totally with BML 5aved

BloodyMoonLike
2010-01-03

Thnak you dude..

for all the comments ;D

BloodyMoonLike
2010-01-03

Welcome to NUMA

flawless first map!!
5aved ;D
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