Concrete Jungle

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Author	timothefreerunner
Tags	action author:timothefreerunner flow thwump unrated
Created	2014-09-13
Last Modified	2014-09-13
Rating	4 more votes required for a rating.
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Description	Explore your surroundings

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The top gauss could've been taken out entirely or moved to a more open location where it could do more damage, but otherwise the gameplay is solid. As for the aesthetics, I agree with blacklef, and I think they could've been improved with neater and more uniform gold placement. By that I mean... patterns. Maybe it's as simple as three gold pieces placed in a straight line half a tile apart from each other, but patterns, no matter how basic, can greatly contribute to aesthetics. Of course, breaking from patterns can be cool too, but imo it doesn't work here aesthetically.

3/5. Totally decent, but it does have the aforementioned flaws.

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Demo Data

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blacklef

2014-09-13

My clumsy demo

Good gameplay, but I dont like the aesthetics of it.

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Demo Data

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Concrete Jungle

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Comments

Completion.

My clumsy demo