My first Race
Author | nikoniko |
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Tags | author:nikoniko playable race rated |
Created | 2006-06-18 |
Last Modified | 2006-07-22 |
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3 by 8 people.
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Description | This my first race, vote, comment and enjoy!!Plz |
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2006-06-18
By the way...
I also agree with legacy on most of the spots he shows to be choppy...because they are. lol.
2006-06-18
Hmm...
I like the over-lapping track idea (unless I don't do much "racing" on N), and some of it is just cool...but it lacks fluency because most of it isn't very round and you hit too many flat surfaces, making it difficult to jump because of how many times you have to jump.
GJ, anyway. Work on the fluency and take everyone's advice.
GJ, anyway. Work on the fluency and take everyone's advice.
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2006-06-18
It's fine
Its not amazing but I don't see any major problems. Just keep working on race maps and never ever use launch pads like that again.
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2006-06-18
And Legacy,
Most of the 'choppy places' are your not that good skills. I mean, what's choppy about the end?
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2006-06-18
Don't ask for jelly races.
Slick races have been boring for a long time.
This is good, but lacks thrills. Try this just to get an idea of what you can do:
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This is good, but lacks thrills. Try this just to get an idea of what you can do:
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2006-06-18
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The Last (the boucing up on the trap to turn) and begging parts were good ( going up and down)
2006-06-18
Alright,
you have the basic idea for a race, but is isn't fluid.
In my demo, n dances in all the places that are choppy.
In my demo, n dances in all the places that are choppy.
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NinjaStix
No