Gates

Not logged in

Hot Maps

Active Authors

Featured Maps

Random

Hover over the thumbnail for a full-size version.


Author	Haggarduser
Tags	action author:haggarduser playable unrated
Created	2006-10-01
Rating	2 more votes required for a rating.
Map Data	$Gates#Haggarduser#none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|5^396,168!8^684,36,1!8^108,36,1!8^84,36,1!8^708,36,1!11^396,480,396,540!9^432,72,1,0,31,12,1,0,-1!9^360,72,1,0,1,12,1,0,-1!3^756,36!3^36,36!3^420,348!3^468,372!3^372,348!3^324,372!3^276,396!3^516,396!12^732,276!12^732,264!12^732,252!12^60,276!12^60,264!12^60,252!12^444,180!12^348,180!12^336,180!12^324,180!12^456,180!12^468,180!7^348,540,2!7^468,540,2!9^660,480,0,0,27,7,1,-1,0!9^132,480,0,0,5,7,1,0,0!9^696,264,1,0,31,20,1,0,0!9^96,264,1,0,1,20,1,0,0!0^438,72!0^438,66!0^432,66!0^426,66!0^426,72!0^426,78!0^432,78!0^438,78!0^366,72!0^366,66!0^360,66!0^354,66!0^354,72!0^354,78!0^360,78!0^366,78!4^420,114,1!4^372,114,1!9^396,204,1,0,16,13,1,0,-1!4^660,570,1!4^132,570,1!2^396,468,0,-1#
Description	This is my first map. Please tell me how to improve.

Some things to improve on:

The level could have had a bit more flow added to it.
And there could have been some harder drones to make the level more interesting.

Anway because it is your first map a 3.5/5

XkY

2006-10-01

^_-

Not bad for a first map. It's easy but I like it.

Haggarduser

2006-10-01

Thanks

Thanks for the advice, here's my replay data.

Demo Data	3088:0\|35790848\|35791394\|35791394\|107376162\|107374182\|107374182\|107374182\|107374182\|107374182\|107374182\|107374182\|35791462\|35791394\|35791394\|35791394\|35791394\|35791394\|17896226\|17895697\|17895697\|17895697\|17895697\|17895697\|17895697\|17895697\|17895697\|17895697\|17895697\|17895697\|1118481\|89618146\|71652693\|71583332\|35792486\|35791394\|35791394\|35791394\|35791394\|35791394\|35791394\|35791394\|35791394\|35791394\|219152930\|107374199\|71722598\|89478468\|17896789\|17895697\|17895697\|1118481\|0\|35790848\|139810\|17895697\|17895697\|17895697\|17895697\|17895697\|17895697\|125199980\|89478485\|89478485\|89478485\|89478485\|105141589\|107374182\|107374182\|1094\|35651584\|34\|0\|0\|35782656\|35791394\|35791394\|34\|0\|0\|35782656\|35791394\|35791394\|35791394\|35791394\|35791394\|35791394\|35791394\|35791394\|35791394\|35791394\|35791394\|17895682\|17895697\|17895697\|17895697\|17895697\|17895697\|17895697\|17895697\|97587473\|17913173\|17895697\|17895697\|17895697\|17895697\|17895697\|17895697\|17895697\|17895697\|33624337\|35791394\|35791394\|35791394\|35791394\|35791394\|35791394\|35791394\|35791394\|35791394\|35791394\|35791394\|2\|35791392\|35791394\|35791394\|35791394\|139810\|0\|0\|0\|0\|0\|0\|0\|0\|0\|0\|17895696\|17895697\|17895697\|17895697\|17895697\|17895697\|17895697\|17895697\|17895697\|17895697\|17895697\|17895697\|89480465\|89478485\|89478485\|89478485\|89478485\|89478485\|89478485\|89478485\|17896789\|17895697\|89478493\|201396565\|107374182\|107374182\|35792486\|139810\|0\|35651584\|35791394\|35791394\|35791394\|35791394\|237117986\|107374182\|107374182\|96477734\|89478485\|17895697\|17895697\|17895697\|17895697\|17895697\|17895697\|17895697\|17895697\|17895697\|0\|0\|0\|0\|0\|35782656\|35791394\|35791394\|35791394\|35791394\|8738\|0\|17891328\|17895697\|1\|0\|0\|0\|17895696\|17895697\|17895697\|89478493\|89478485\|89478485\|219222357\|89478485\|89478485\|89478485\|89478485\|17896789\|89478493\|89478485\|17896789\|89985297\|89478485\|89478485\|89478485\|80810325\|71582788\|107374182\|2\|17891328\|273\|17895424\|17895697\|219222289\|89478485\|89478485\|17\|0\|0\|0\|0\|0\|0\|0\|0\|123539729\|107374182\|107374182\|107374182\|107374182\|107374182\|107374182\|35791398\|35791394\|35791394\|35791394\|35791394\|35791394\|35791394\|107376162\|107374182\|107374182\|107374182\|107374182\|107374182\|107374182\|107374182\|35791462\|35791394\|35791394\|115483170\|107374182\|107374182\|107374182\|36071014\|107376162\|35792486\|35791394\|35791394\|35791394\|35791394\|35791394\|107374190\|35792486\|89480192\|89478485\|89478485\|17896789\|17895697\|0\|17825792\|17895697\|17895697\|17895697\|219222289\|89478485\|89478485\|113246481\|107374182\|35791394\|35791394\|35791394\|35791394\|35791394\|35791394\|35791394\|35791394\|35791394\|8738\|0\|0\|0\|17825792\|17895697\|17895697\|17895697\|17895697\|69905\|35651584\|8738\|0\|35782656\|34\|0\|35651584\|35791394\|35791394\|35791394\|107405858\|107374182\|107374182\|36071014\|107374190\|107374182\|107374182\|107374182\|36071014\|107374306\|107374182\|35791394\|35791394\|107374306\|107374182\|107374182\|140902\|89474124\|22369621\|17\|0\|35791394\|35791394\|72089600\|107374148\|107374182\|107374182\|107374182\|107374182\|107374182\|157286\|0\|0\|0\|512\|16777216\|17\|35651584\|34\|0\|0\|0\|33554432\|35791394\|219152384\|89478485\|89478485\|89478485\|89478485\|89478485\|89478485\|89478485\|89478485\|17895697\|89510161\|89478485\|17895697\|17895697\|17895697\|35782656\|139810\|17895696\|89510161\|17895701\|17895697\|17\|0\|0\|0\|219222289\|89478485\|89478485\|22369621\|89480465\|89478485\|201397589\|107374182\|107374182\|107374182\|107374182\|107374182\|107374182\|107374182\|107374182\|35808870\|35791394\|35791394\|2\|35791394\|2\|0\|0\|0\|8738\|0\|2236962\|0\|0\|35791360\|8738\|0\|35791394\|34\|0\|0\|0\|0\|0\|0\|0\|35791392\|2236962\|0\|17891328\|17895697\|1

Demo Data

3088:0|35790848|35791394|35791394|107376162|107374182|107374182|107374182|107374182|107374182|107374182|107374182|35791462|35791394|35791394|35791394|35791394|35791394|17896226|17895697|17895697|17895697|17895697|17895697|17895697|17895697|17895697|17895697|17895697|17895697|1118481|89618146|71652693|71583332|35792486|35791394|35791394|35791394|35791394|35791394|35791394|35791394|35791394|35791394|219152930|107374199|71722598|89478468|17896789|17895697|17895697|1118481|0|35790848|139810|17895697|17895697|17895697|17895697|17895697|17895697|125199980|89478485|89478485|89478485|89478485|105141589|107374182|107374182|1094|35651584|34|0|0|35782656|35791394|35791394|34|0|0|35782656|35791394|35791394|35791394|35791394|35791394|35791394|35791394|35791394|35791394|35791394|35791394|17895682|17895697|17895697|17895697|17895697|17895697|17895697|17895697|97587473|17913173|17895697|17895697|17895697|17895697|17895697|17895697|17895697|17895697|33624337|35791394|35791394|35791394|35791394|35791394|35791394|35791394|35791394|35791394|35791394|35791394|2|35791392|35791394|35791394|35791394|139810|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|17895696|17895697|17895697|17895697|17895697|17895697|17895697|17895697|17895697|17895697|17895697|17895697|89480465|89478485|89478485|89478485|89478485|89478485|89478485|89478485|17896789|17895697|89478493|201396565|107374182|107374182|35792486|139810|0|35651584|35791394|35791394|35791394|35791394|237117986|107374182|107374182|96477734|89478485|17895697|17895697|17895697|17895697|17895697|17895697|17895697|17895697|17895697|0|0|0|0|0|35782656|35791394|35791394|35791394|35791394|8738|0|17891328|17895697|1|0|0|0|17895696|17895697|17895697|89478493|89478485|89478485|219222357|89478485|89478485|89478485|89478485|17896789|89478493|89478485|17896789|89985297|89478485|89478485|89478485|80810325|71582788|107374182|2|17891328|273|17895424|17895697|219222289|89478485|89478485|17|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|123539729|107374182|107374182|107374182|107374182|107374182|107374182|35791398|35791394|35791394|35791394|35791394|35791394|35791394|107376162|107374182|107374182|107374182|107374182|107374182|107374182|107374182|35791462|35791394|35791394|115483170|107374182|107374182|107374182|36071014|107376162|35792486|35791394|35791394|35791394|35791394|35791394|107374190|35792486|89480192|89478485|89478485|17896789|17895697|0|17825792|17895697|17895697|17895697|219222289|89478485|89478485|113246481|107374182|35791394|35791394|35791394|35791394|35791394|35791394|35791394|35791394|35791394|8738|0|0|0|17825792|17895697|17895697|17895697|17895697|69905|35651584|8738|0|35782656|34|0|35651584|35791394|35791394|35791394|107405858|107374182|107374182|36071014|107374190|107374182|107374182|107374182|36071014|107374306|107374182|35791394|35791394|107374306|107374182|107374182|140902|89474124|22369621|17|0|35791394|35791394|72089600|107374148|107374182|107374182|107374182|107374182|107374182|157286|0|0|0|512|16777216|17|35651584|34|0|0|0|33554432|35791394|219152384|89478485|89478485|89478485|89478485|89478485|89478485|89478485|89478485|17895697|89510161|89478485|17895697|17895697|17895697|35782656|139810|17895696|89510161|17895701|17895697|17|0|0|0|219222289|89478485|89478485|22369621|89480465|89478485|201397589|107374182|107374182|107374182|107374182|107374182|107374182|107374182|107374182|35808870|35791394|35791394|2|35791394|2|0|0|0|8738|0|2236962|0|0|35791360|8738|0|35791394|34|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|35791392|2236962|0|17891328|17895697|1

nipps

2006-10-01

ummm

you shoul make it less bare and make it smaller, like make it more crammed in(not alot though. the bottom floor is xtremely easy by the way.some more gold and dont over do the gauses.

hope this helps :P

Gates

Comments

An alright frst map

^_-

Thanks

ummm