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Second Try

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Author Trovius
Tags author:trovius playable race unrated
Created 2006-10-15
Rating 2 more votes required for a rating.
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Description This is the second race I've ever made. (DOWN THE RABBIT HOLE was my third) Please rate and comment!!! Check out my other maps too.

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Thanks...

I'll keep that in mind.

Cheatable

A demonstration of my second pointer.
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A few pointers

1. Like Mechtradevil said, the flow isn't that good and the tileset could be better.
2. There and back again races like this one are very cheatable, especially if you put the exit switch by the exit.
3. Try not to use launchpads in races except if they are used to reverse your direction.
4. Gold placement. Place gold where the player will get it at the maximum speed. I found that if I moved too fast, I missed some of the gold.
4a. Amount of gold. Decrease the amount of gold. Use only what's necessary or what looks good, i.e. a pattern.

Not bad for a second, though, I'll give it a 3.5 for average. Check out some of the top-rated races to get a feel for what should be going on.

I give it a 3.5/5

because it could have better flow in parts where there is only one block to propel off of in a circle area, and the tileset was a little whack. but good overall I surpose.
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First try!

I like races!
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