Unfriendly Tree

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Author	WhiteShadow
Tags	action author:whiteshadow playable unrated
Created	2007-01-08
Last Modified	2007-01-08
Rating	4 more votes required for a rating.
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Description	Let's go for a stroll under that tree, maybe take a little... wait a minute... what the hack kind of tree is that?! This is my second submitted map. Critiques are welcome and would be appreciated, as well as advice

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The Viewing Field

Most of the laser drones weren't used to great effect. I think you should have placed the ones at the top better, or use a better tile to increase the laser's sight, possibly the '2' tile.

Also, the tileset needs a little work, as it only vaguely resembled a tree. Lastly, from an aesthetical point of view, I think some of the object placement was out of place, especially the gausses. Overall, not bad. 2.5/5

Unfriendly Tree

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Comments

For a second, it's not bad.