Green Dragon Part 5
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| Author | cucumber_boy |
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| Tags | author:cucumber_boy n-art rated |
| Created | 2007-05-26 |
| Last Modified | 2007-05-28 |
| Rating |
4 by 14 people.
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| Map Data | |
| Description | Boy the sky is time consuming!
Put another 2 hours into it! I added a much more sky Overall Takes 14 minutes and 38 seconds to load on my home computer. Just to give you an idea of how big this project actually is the code itself takes up 19 pages 12pt font, and single spaced times new roman. The average ms/f when I am in the Neditor is about 1500, and when not in the neditor about 2500. This is a really big code! Overall Time taken to complete this is reaching about 7 hours! Enjoy! This is about as far as my home computer can take me, so yeah! Comments? Part 1: http://numa.notdot.net/map/89636 Part 2: http://numa.notdot.net/map/89712 Part 3: http://numa.notdot.net/map/90139 Part 4: http://numa.notdot.net/map/90354 |
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2007-10-02
THE CLOULDS
LOOK S LIOKE THEY WER DREW BY A FIFE YEER OLD
2007-05-28
that depends
for me, the eye seems black, so you may want to use multiple switches and make the pupil yellow or red.
and Im saying trap door and regular door switches.
just dont use blue. or mines.
and Im saying trap door and regular door switches.
just dont use blue. or mines.
2007-05-26
i can't wait to see the final version.
2007-05-26
yep.
I would just appreciate this map so much more if the clouds matched. Amazing job on the rest of it, though.
2007-05-26
@skyline
like afternoon dragon step 04 did?
2007-05-26
Hmm
The dragons and the mountains are very nice, but I think those cliched, kindergarten-style clouds absolutely ruin the map. It would be much better without them. You could try putting in more realistic clouds, and it would match the rest of this awesome n-art.
2007-05-26
Awesome as always....
I really adore your Art!!! 5/5!!! I'm not an expert but I think the dragon's "hair" could be a little bit more golden?
2007-05-26
@ 99tutle99
how do you suggest that I could do that? I have played around with the idea, but have come up with nothing
@seven_two
is this what you want by gradient, I am going to complete the way I have been, becuase there is no way that I can go back now, since all the doors are clumped togother and the doors are the only place you can delete, not the actual switch, so yeah
http://numa.notdot.net/map/90397
@seven_two
is this what you want by gradient, I am going to complete the way I have been, becuase there is no way that I can go back now, since all the doors are clumped togother and the doors are the only place you can delete, not the actual switch, so yeah
http://numa.notdot.net/map/90397
2007-05-26
and, if possible
make the eye easier to see.
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2007-05-26
ok
I'll take SOME of those suggestions into consideration
thanx for the feedback!
thanx for the feedback!
2007-05-26
Lots of room for improvement:
The body near the neck needs a little bit of shrinking, the clouds needs to look more like it is part of the background (maybe you would do that for the final step) and..
Why didn't you complete that mountain at the bottom?
Move the launchpads further up for a better effect of shine, and what is that thing at the top left corner? It doesn't look like anything. I think you should delete it, but if you do make it something in the final step, don't delete it.
By the way, some of the mountains need smoothening. The clouds needs smoothening too..
And why is the sky all blue? Please fade it as it gets lower, and put a sun!
It's all for the next step, and I don't like how you put it as N Art, not Incomplete.
Why didn't you complete that mountain at the bottom?
Move the launchpads further up for a better effect of shine, and what is that thing at the top left corner? It doesn't look like anything. I think you should delete it, but if you do make it something in the final step, don't delete it.
By the way, some of the mountains need smoothening. The clouds needs smoothening too..
And why is the sky all blue? Please fade it as it gets lower, and put a sun!
It's all for the next step, and I don't like how you put it as N Art, not Incomplete.
2007-05-26
The clouds are not purple, they ARE grey
but its an optical illusion on how it is next to so much blue that it appears grey, any suggestions on how I can get the clouds to ACTUALLY look grey?
2007-05-26
Well
Take your time. Don't stress yourself.
2007-05-26
make the clouds grey
not that purple colour
scales are nice
background complements the dragon
nice work
will wait to rate
scales are nice
background complements the dragon
nice work
will wait to rate
2007-05-26
No I haven't
I still have to do the other side of the sky (a very daunting task!)
2007-05-26
You completed it.
And it's better than I thought it would look. good job. 5/5 and faved.
teraza
the clouds r weird