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Author	aderberry2
Tags	author:aderberry2 playable survival unrated
Created	2007-05-30
Rating	3 more votes required for a rating.
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Description	my first map... rate plz

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wizard_amul

2007-05-30

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v_to_the_fifth

2007-05-30

nice for a first map

but i agree with lord day. Also, open it up just a bit more, it seemed a little cramped to me.

lord_day

2007-05-30

Pretty good for a first map.

I enjoyed it :)

Here is some advice:
1) Don't hide enemies. It doesn't look good, and isn't fun to play against.
2) Don't force the player to go through long stretches of the level twice. It's pretty boring.
3) The area with all the doors was messy. I suggest that you keep the door mechanics neat and simple, it looks and plays better.

Hope that helps.
lord_day

aderberry2

2007-05-30

the demo

read the title lol

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