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Author	Val_Vorpone
Tags	action author:val_vorpone playable unrated
Created	2007-07-16
Rating	1 more votes required for a rating.
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Description	The first map Ive ever made, I dont think its too good. Maybe if I got some critique from better mappers?

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gloomp

2007-07-16

Better Than my First Map

Here's a guide of what and what not to do: http://jeffkillian.com/NUMA.htm

Val_Vorpone

2007-07-16

wayyy better

than my first level! a bit random and plain.... it was....how do i say.... not so exciting...
haha but I'm still a noob so you shouldnt listen to me.
I'd say a 2.5 but since it's your first a 3. :]

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skyline356

2007-07-16

Hm.

Level generator, I'd guess.

Val_Vorpone

2007-07-16

Thanks!

I guess Ill try for something less random for my next map. This was mostly just me getting used to the system and how to use things.

Myrrhman

2007-07-16

Sophisticated use of objects.

open ended, but a little too ambiguous. Parts didn't flow logically into others, but that's something that takes a while to learn. As is now, I think this, you're definitely starting on a strong foot. Welcome. 3/5.

bonygrunt

2007-07-16

Good!

To be honest, I didn't like it much - it just seemed kind of random, like nothing really fit well together; for example, the mines randomly placed and the lone drone. However, I am VERY glad you didn't hide trap doors or anything that would unexpectedly prevent the player from finishing the level (you'd know what I mean by playing many first maps), along with other problems newcomers do. Not a great map, but no nooby mistakes. Believe me, that is a really good thing.