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Paragon

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Author aspectus
Tags artistic author:aspectus bird n-art nonplayable rated
Created 2007-08-08
Rating
4
by 7 people.
Map Data
Description I just whipped this up while playing around... comments on how to make it better would be appreciated - i know it's not perfect.

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bobaganuesh_2
2009-04-06

that's pretty cool

take Ryzor's advice, and trust me you didn't autogenerate this (means you put picture data into a tileset maker to spit out the image in tileset formation)

Cossack
2007-08-09

sorry

i ment program

Cossack
2007-08-09

means

that you used a prograp to make this map rather than making it off by hand yourself. and yeah - fix the wings - it really does look more like a chicken. if they get bigger/grander itll be great. i wont rate for now

aspectus
2007-08-09

?

autogenerated?

mr_pac
2007-08-09

it looks

autogenerated.

Ryzor
2007-08-09

Well,

there are a few ways to improve it, but it is very good. You could make the wings broader and longer (I noticed that you tried to fit them in the box; that isnt necessary, really). Also, maybe make the talons a wee bit larger (oxymoron alert). Other than that, its cool. This map garners a 3/5 for looking more like a chicken than a phoenix. Work on it and you definately have something here.