Slow Burn
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| Author | etdeshon |
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| Tags | author:etdeshon fun race rated |
| Created | 2009-02-03 |
| Last Modified | 2009-02-03 |
| Rating |
4 by 7 people.
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| Description | My favorite so far. It's like different from what i usually make, and its fun! lol. have fun! |
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2009-08-12
:P
righto thanks for offer mate.
if i ever need advice i'll be sure to ask.
and looking forward to seeing a couple of new maps from you??
if i ever need advice i'll be sure to ask.
and looking forward to seeing a couple of new maps from you??
2009-02-04
yeah...
very good. you should make more.P.s. Check out my maps?
2009-02-03
:/
I dont know, I really liked the fast flow on this race, but I didn't like the race itself and the enemies, I don't know exactly what, it just didn't come together as much as I wished it would.
2009-02-03
this was fun
but i do agree with destiny about a few things. it just felt a bit bare. the flow was nice and the path was good but it didn't make me think wow. still a 4 from me though.
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2009-02-03
I didnt like the end
okay, so - i'm gonna give you some critisism here, take it and improve ^^
So. The tiles are getting a little repetative. Try experimenting with aesthetics, you are far past the stage where you use tilesets like this, i know you can do waaaay better.
The gold is a little... icky, but that's minor. Don't c-snap the gold together, it's not very appealing.
The flow was mostly nice, the key and everything after it was awkward, really. I've seen better from you.
A massive way you could improve your races is to give them a theme. Or if you can do it well enough, an atmosphere. It's not easy to do, but if you can select a theme before you begin making a race, then make flow and aesthetics and enemies and whatever else into that theme, you can acheive something extraordinary. It takes a while, but i know you can do it.
I believe.
So. The tiles are getting a little repetative. Try experimenting with aesthetics, you are far past the stage where you use tilesets like this, i know you can do waaaay better.
The gold is a little... icky, but that's minor. Don't c-snap the gold together, it's not very appealing.
The flow was mostly nice, the key and everything after it was awkward, really. I've seen better from you.
A massive way you could improve your races is to give them a theme. Or if you can do it well enough, an atmosphere. It's not easy to do, but if you can select a theme before you begin making a race, then make flow and aesthetics and enemies and whatever else into that theme, you can acheive something extraordinary. It takes a while, but i know you can do it.
I believe.
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2009-02-03
Great race
Nice flow. And it looks quite nice, too.
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2009-02-03
Atreyu?
Song?
2009-02-03
flow demo
not as good as my last few, but its one nonetheless. lol! have fun!
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ultimatereading
my favourite