i trully enjoyed the end, and will use that kind of challenge in my upcoming levels most likely, but as for the rest of the level, blah, no offence

ignore the last couple sentences that i said... dont even bother with other peoples' ideas! you already have great, unique ideas - they just need some polishing up.

interesting level. it started alright, but some of the trap doors on the right wall were placed over mines, which made it impossible (i think) to wall jump up them. However, the end was very intriguing! I loved the idea of running on the thwump over the mines and all that other thwump-y stuff you did. i will have to play with some of those concepts myself. so it was decent, but try making your levels a little more "pretty." you know, like neat tilesets and good aesthetic design. honestly, this map should be in the "puzzle" category because of the way it plays. try looking at some of the top-rated action maps to see what is good, etc. also if you are more into making puzzle-ish maps (which it seems you are better at), look at the top-rated puzzle maps for ideas. 3 N's!