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Ned Is Your Father!

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Author rit0987
Tags author:rit0987 father fun ned playable race rated
Created 2009-05-23
Last Modified 2009-05-23
Rating
4
by 12 people.
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Description I tried to make a longer race reusing some sections and that made it a bit weird.
Again I ask: Do you see an improvement?
Tips are welcome
RCE!

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At first

I couldn't work out the track until I looked at GNOTHERGNU's demo.
I would've rated it 2 if I hadn't looked at GNOTHERGNU's demo
but since I looked at GNOTHERGNU's demo I anm rating it 3.6/5
3/5
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and just experiment, kinda like I'm doing. You have a really good hang of creating good flow, but you kinda put too much gold in some places, and that looked ugly. But your races are getting better, in terms of flow and difficulty.
3/5
Also, would you mind rating my map Weaponry [nmaps.net]?

meh

not as good as ur others.
some parts i c where the flow was, but u could never rly jump high enough, breaking the flow.
anyway, advice is same as i always say : )
aexsthetics and make flow more exciting.
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yeah i suppose

the flow also isn't perfect....but i can't perfect either of those things...so keep on trying...'ll get there.

so I need to work on aesthetics?
:D

what he said

...flow was pretty solid...and the aesthetics weren't really. The bottom also seemed a little long and actionless

3/5...

i messed up

look at some of destiny's races and try to make your own a little more aesthetically pleasing.
Besides that the play was good.
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